WHAT IS YOUR WRITING ENVIRONMENT?
Another question that comes up a lot in the writing forums is writing environment.
Where do you write?
When do you write?
Under what conditions do you write?
What music do you listen to when you write?
Bla bla bla.
I’ve touched on some of these areas in the past and it’s time to look at them in more detail.
THE SENSITIVE ARTÉSTE
Okay, not everyone can write on the fly. That’s understandable. We’re not all like the war correspondent that can take paper in pen in a combat zone, or be behind enemy lines or in the middle of a gang war with a recorder, giving a blow-by-blow of the action. We’re of a more creative bent, which usually requires a certain setting and mood.
What’s yours?
PLACE
Some of us can write almost anywhere. Nowadays, most of us are only bound by where we can take a laptop. This can be a library, a coffeehouse, a park, a bedroom, or to quote my buddy, James Rollins, an airplane. If you still use pen and paper, same rule applies.
On the other hand, I use a PC, a specific PC, and it sits in my computer/music room and that’s where I do all my writing. I used to be able to write at work during my old job in my spare time. No more. That leaves after work and on weekends, time permitting. My place is pretty specific. It may be the same for a lot of you.
WHEN
Some people can write on the fly. I certainly can, if the opportunity strikes.
Some of you have to be in a certain mood. Many of you can’t if you’re under stress, while others of you find writing is therapy.
To me, writing is an escape from the real world. When I get in the zone, the world more or less disappears for a time, like watching a movie, except I’m making the movie up as I go along. Sure, I’m still fully aware of my surroundings, but I’m still off in another world.
Some of you struggle to get in your zone. Your PLACE can severely affect you getting in your zone. It must be picked with great care, to ensure you can reach that zone.
That all goes back to when. If your place is the library, but your when happens to be after the library is closed, scratch that off to another unproductive day unless you have an alternative location. The same if the local Starbucks is overcrowded and noisy, and you’re easily distracted. Given that any coffeehouse is more than likely noisy and overcrowded, that should be a given.
Say you’re at home and your when is interrupted by a malfunctioning toilet. You have to stop and address the problem. Can you get back your when and into the zone again?
Whatever your place, the when has to coincide with it or you miss an opportunity and guess what? No new pages come out.
Does that mean you can’t accomplish anything?
No.
You can still be thinking about what to do while you address the interruption. Maybe scribble notes or by repetitive thinking, get something in mind to jot down when you get time later.
CONDITIONS
This goes back to the first two. Where and when.
How sensitive are you? How distracted can you get? How much flack in the background does it take to veer you off the path?
As for me, a bomb can go off in the background and if I’m in the zone, I generally don’t notice unless the wife want’s something. THEN I take notice! I address the problem, then come back and pick up where I left off as if nothing ever happened. I don’t lose focus.
For some of you, the slightest thing can ruin your concentration. For you, conditions have to be exactly right or you can’t get out a creative thing.
That doesn’t mean I don’t have fleeting thoughts, but generally, if I think of something and can let it sink in, I can recall it later Not always, but a lot of the time. I know I’ve forgotten lots of great things, but many I’ve been able to retain. Some I’ve had to jot on sticky notes on my computer desk because I knew I wouldn’t use them until much later. So, to ensure I don’t forget them over time…
What are your conditions? Do you need to have absolute quiet? Do you need to be isolated? Is a coffee shop to noisy for you? Are the chirping birds and distant traffic noise in a park too distracting for you to concentrate? Is the whispering in the library too much to take?
Do you need to be in a soundproof chamber to be able to get in your zone?
I think that’s probably taking it a bit too far, but everyone has their certain conditions. Maybe subtle external noises aren’t the factor at all.
Maybe you need incense burning. Maybe you need certain background noises to get you pumped up.
Maybe you need music?
WHAT MUSIC DO YOU LISTEN TO WHEN YOU WRITE?
A real common question that comes up on the forums is: What music do you listen to when you write? I sometimes think the real motivation for half these threads is just an excuse for people to plug their favorite bands, but hey, why not? I do in my books, well some of them anyway. Some I plug are not so favorite, some for shock value, but who’s counting?
Music can not only soothe, but it can fire one up. It can also help drown out other distracting noises. It can help get one in the zone, if chosen well.
Personally, I can’t play it without headphones. The heavy and often extreme metal I listen to and the volume I’d require just to hear it would creep right through the wall into the living room and drown out the TV. Uh, not good. I’m not a fan of headphones, so I just don’t bother. No big loss. I have a CD player in the car and get to listen to my heavy metal vomit music on the way to and from work every day. It has nothing to do with my writing anyway.
Music has been a big inspiration in my writing, in more ways than one, but I don’t play it in my head. I used to think I did, and said so in various forums. However, after really thinking about it, it turns out I actually spend all my mental real estate on the story. Music isn’t even in the realm of what I’m doing. I know because as I was thinking about this article, I was writing a chapter in my latest fantasy novel and I dual purposed, thinking of what I was thinking about. Nope, no music. I was just concentrating on the story. In the next room, the TV was going on some movie. I heard little snippets of sound, but it was all “Wa wa wa wa wa.” Like adults talking in a Charlie Brown cartoon.
I was in the zone.
Some people would have their favorite music going to get them in the zone. At the same time, pitching their favorite bands.
Whatever works.
I’ll admit that as I’m listening to my music on the way to work, which all joking aside, may be metal, but is usually (as they say), heavy but clean vocals, I’m quite often thinking of some plot element of one of my stories. There you go.
SUMMARY
Environment is a key element to any writer. We’re word artists. We have to get in the zone. While it may seem elaborate or screwy to some, you DO have to be in a mood and a certain setting or environment to get fired up. At least most of us do. While I may be easier to please than most, I fully understand what it takes to get there.
Happy writing!
DO REAL EVENTS INSPIRE YOUR FICTION?
You’ve probably all seen the movie quote “Inspired by true events.” Maybe, not as often, you may see it at the beginning of a book.
I recently read a great icky bug book series that was inspired by a true event. That made me think of how often do we, as writers get our ideas from true events versus inspiration from other sources.
ALL IDEAS COME FROM SOMEWHERE
No idea comes from a dry well. Every story idea and plot has to come from some nugget of inspiration. Maybe an old TV show, movie, or just an idea that’s been rolling around in our head for years. That’s especially true with fantasy and science fiction.
When it comes to real-world stories, there’s a likelier chance some real-world incident may be the root inspiration for your story.
REAL-WORLD INSPIRATION
As for me, I generally get my inspirations out of thin air. However, a lot of the time, my inspirations, at least for my real-world adventure/thrillers and icky bug come from locations, rather than real events. In the case of my adventure/thrillers, Lusitania Gold was based on a real event, the sinking of the Lusitania. On the other hand, the rest of the series was based on locations, rather than specific events.
My new friend, Trent, who writes horror, started his series based on a real event. The stories aren’t based on reality, but were inspired by this true event. I’ve seen many stories take root from something real and go off on their own tangent and take a life of their own.
FICTIONALIZED REALITY
This is a case where the story is based on real events, but the author is filling in the blanks, based on what he speculates the real characters might have said and did, rather than what may have actually happened. Why? Because there’s nobody around to fill in those blanks. Either the real people are all dead, or unwilling to participate in the story. While this seemingly can lead to liability issues, if done with taste and dignity, it can be accomplished without ruffling too many feathers. These stories have even ruffled feathers to little consequence.
Another term for it is fictionalized autobiography.
STARTING OFF POINT
The whole point of the initial true event isn’t to tell that story, but to be the starting off point for a fictional story. If you were telling that story, it would be non-fiction. After all, you’re describing the true event. Inspired by means exactly that. The even inspired you to go off into your own world, meaning you in no way are just reciting history. You’re creating an entirely different story, using the true event as the catapult.
That distinction must be made. When someone says “Inspired by true events,” that does NOT mean they’re telling the story of that event. Too many people assume that’s the case. On TV they do that all the time, yet people get all flustered when the actual show goes way off the rails. Everyone should KNOW that it’s not going to be historically accurate! Geez!
The same for your book. My book. Lusitania Gold was inspired by a true event. Yet my story is in no way a historical accounting of the sinking of the real ship. It’s a completely fictionalized adventure/thriller inspired by that infamous sinking. If anyone wants to know the real story, they should get countless non-fiction accounts of the sinking!
SUMMARY
We get the inspiration for our stories from many sources, real and imagined. There’s nothing wrong with giving a nod to the real sources.
Happy writing!
WHO ARE YOU WRITING TO?
This may sound like an obvious question, but you have to stop and think about it, especially when it comes to marketing.
I just attended a writer’s conference and focused on marketing classes.
Let’s face it. My books aren’t exactly setting the world on fire, as far as sales.
That’s not to say I’m groveling in misery, by any stretch. Sure, I’d love to be selling like crazy, but I’m quite satisfied with what I’ve put down on paper and in the ether.
The catch is, finding those that like to read this stuff.
Since I write in multiple genres, I have a potentially wide audience to choose from.
However, it’s not that simple.
Same for you.
Whatever you write, who you think you’re writing for, may not be who is actually reading your books.
FIRST AND FOREMOST
Many of us, unless we take the mercenary approach, start out writing for ourselves. We get fired up, inspired, and decide on a genre or subject and go all out and dream up our “masterpiece.”
After the fact, we strive to get it published and then we come across this little roadblock called finding an audience. While we may have what we think is a popular genre (I pick that generality for simplicity), because there are so many categories of genres and sub-genres, that isn’t as simple as it sounds.
First and foremost, we write the story for ourselves and hope the audience goes along with us. In other words, we market the book to people like ourselves.
RUH ROH…
While there may be others like us that read such and such books, by doing targeted research, you may find some surprising results.
You may find that who you expected to read your specific genre is not who you thought.
Say you’re a thirty year old single female that writes historical romance. You expect your target audience of other single thirty year old single females to also read historical romance.
So, you target that group by hammering them through marketing on social media and with whatever else you use.
The book doesn’t sell.
You wonder why.
By using refined research techniques, you find out that your actual audience is married/divorced/single women from forty to seventy.
Not exactly what you expected.
THE POINT
My exaggerated example is something I learned from the marketing classes I attended at the conference. I’m still just sticking my foot in the water on that one. It takes a good bit of research to figure out how to find who your actual readers are. You need to find those that read the same and similar books to yours. There are a lot more steps. It involves an Excel spreadsheet and multiple web sites.
It seems to be worth it in the long run, but it is time consuming.
I’m going to work it, but I won’t know the results for a while.
This is a long-term project.
I guess it’s a lot better than the spray and pray method of marketing.
SUMMARY
Though it takes work, it’s a lot better to target your audience and know you’re hitting the right people, than to think you are.
We can assume we know our audience because we write fantasy or romance or westerns or whatever. However, you have to consider all the sub-genres within each of those categories. They can get very specific and things are not as simple. That’s where you need to find the same or similar authors and find your true audience.
Then you can truly target your readers.
Happy writing!
THE BOOK YOU JUST CAN’T PUT DOWN PART 2
It happened again.
It’s not like I don’t get flashes of old man repeatability here at Fred Central.
Sure, I’ve repeated the gist of some of my articles. It comes with the territory. However, to blatantly pound in the exact same article so soon after doing so (November 2017), takes some incentive.
I read a lot of books I like, and most of them are okay. However, there are not many I read that I can hardly put down. These are the ones that are so good, I want to drop everything I’m doing to keep reading, to find out what happens next. They’re so addicting, I don’t want to stop to rest, eat, sleep, or get the important stuff done in my day.
So, it happened with a book I picked up last weekend. I’ve seen the book for several months now, but kept pushing it off, not really believing the hype of “One million copies sold,” touted on the cover.
While the premise sounded promising, a murder mystery taking place in London, which is always a nice and creepy setting for me since I’ve been there before, I’ve found a lot of Brit authors to be just okay. Why? Not all of them are there with point of view. There ARE exceptions.
This time I hit gold.
THE GIST
Week after week, I talk about writing. A lot of my subject matter deals with the things that bug me as a reader. In this case, the writer hits all of the standards I preach, at least the most important ones.
Point of view.
Getting to the point.
No extended flashbacks.
No foretelling.
An exciting rhythm to each chapter with a major and tense conclusion urging you to read on.
Some kind of payoff in the end.
WITH A LOT OF THE BOOKS I READ, IT INVOLVES SOME WORK
Why?
I have to suffer to get there.
Normally, a week or so later, I’ll finish the book with an ultimate smile on my face, but I had to work for it. It’s not like I neglected other things to dive into the pages to keep reading. I’ll take my time and “get back to it” when I can.
That’s the usual pattern.
What’s the magic formula that makes these rare ones a breeze to get through?
It boils down to those pet peeves I mentioned above.
POINT OF VIEW
When the author controls the point of view with third-person limited, it keeps the characters on solid ground with no head-hopping, and is not omniscient!
To me there’s nothing more annoying than trying to keep heads straight, or find an author that can’t keep from playing hopscotch with characters within scenes.
Many of those books I can’t put down do have multiple characters. The difference is that when they’re up to bat, so to speak, I know it, and it’s their spotlight and nobody else’s.
That’s the difference!
GETTING TO THE POINT
There’s nothing that makes a book more work than an author who can’t get to the point. When there’s no action or story movement because the author has to delve into every bit of minutiae about the character’s feelings and motivations and life history, well…
It shouldn’t take six chapters, or fifty pages to walk across the street.
NO MAJOR FLASHBACKS
To me, there’s nothing that kills story momentum more than major flashbacks. It’s okay to have a paragraph or two about something in the past.
Or, a prologue.
In the case of the current book, the prologue is from the victim’s point of view and how she’s murdered. While some could argue this should be chapter one, I can take it either way.
However, to bring the story to a screeching halt and jump “forward” to the past right in the middle of the story, or to do it multiple times, like playing hopscotch with the timeline, drives me crazy!
A linear story is much easier to take than one where the author can’t make up their mind when they want it to take place.
FORETELLING
Just as irritating as present tense is foretelling. I cannot stand when the author tells me what’s going to happen. I’d much prefer to discover it on my own as the story develops. I hate spoilers!
A PAYOFF
There has to be a reason for reading this story in the first place. If I’m going to invest money and time in your work, there’d better be a good reason for it!
Don’t give me this “real life” bullshit.
I don’t read fiction for real life. If I wanted that, I’d go to the library and get a non-fiction textbook or watch the news.
Even so, even knowing or suspecting the protagonists are going to live doesn’t mean there can’t be other surprises along the way. There has to be ups and downs, of course. It’s all about how does the character get out of one pickle and on to the next? If it’s a series, of course the protagonist is going to live, and probably several of the sidekicks. So what? It’s a series. It wouldn’t be one without survivors.
In one-off stories, to me, there’s no bigger waste of time than a story with a bummer ending.
Period.
Add to that, bittersweet.
For some, that’s what they want.
Fine.
Not my thing at all and not for a lot of others as well.
I like to feel good at the end of a story, not bummed out. I can get all the bummer I want watching the nightly news. I’m not one to revel in misery.
SUMMARY
Folks, all these are things I’ve preached about here at Fred Central. Books I can’t put down are magic because the writing is addictive and has all the qualities I mentioned above. That’s what I try to accomplish in my own writing. So far, from the feedback I’ve received, it seems to be working most of the time.
I’m happy with that.
How about you?
Happy writing!
MOTIVATION AND DISCIPLINE
If you look back at some of my articles, you’ll see that I’ve either talked directly about, or talked around these subjects. As I browse the Facebook forums, I see threads almost daily addressing both motivation and discipline in one fashion or other.
It still boils down to this: Why are you doing this? Why are you writing?
JEALOUSY
While you may have started all enthused/motivated and put out a big burst of effort, once you got into the reality of writing, you found that it wasn’t magic. While some struck lightning in a bottle, little ole’ you could never catch a break.
Your friends or even frienemies who write that “crappy stuff” got all the luck and got the big deals, or made the big sales.
You, on the other hand, had to sit back and could barely make anyone notice.
It burns you up.
Why should you bother? Why should you continue on?
IT COMES EASY FOR SOME
Before we even get to the publishing stage, you get that fantastic idea, you start to write, but get stuck. Or, you just run out of steam.
For others, it flows out. They can sit down any time and slam it out, page-after-page, lay down their ideas and worry about cleaning it up later.
Some have to pick apart each page as they go. It takes them forever to crawl out a single chapter because they have to make it perfect before they go on. For many, this means losing sight of what you started to write in the first place.
Some of you procrastinate. You’re burning with ideas, maybe even write furious notes. However, on the execution, everything falls apart. You’ll get to it tomorrow. Then the next day, then the next, then the next until it never gets done.
At the same time, your bud has already moved on to the second or third book.
MOTIVATION
I’ve mentioned this numerous times not only here, but in the forums. It’s one of my mantras. Is writing a hobby, a torture, or a passion? If it’s the first two, I suggest you find something else to do.
If it’s a passion, but you still have certain of those personality quirks that hold you back, you have to think about why you’re writing this particular “masterpiece” in the first place.
However, forgetting why you’re writing, and speaking strictly of motivation, you started a novel.
Why?
What’s the point?
Regardless of why you’re doing it, you have to think of why you should finish it. If you have no compelling reason to do so, don’t! Move on. However, if you DO have a compelling reason to complete this novel, think about it and focus on that as your motivation.
Why have you slowed down or stopped writing?
Has life just got in the way?
Has the inspiration stopped?
Have you hit a writing roadblock – did you write yourself into a corner?
Think about what you originally wanted to accomplish with this project. If you still get excited about it, there’s your motivation.
If you aren’t excited about it, or if you dread it…or if it don’t feel right, stop and figure what went wrong and fix it. If that doesn’t work, maybe it’s time to abandon the project and start another one. Let this thing sit for another time when the muse may strike again.
If you have no motivation, it’ll never get done.
Jealousy of someone else’s success isn’t motivation.
Motivation is believing you have something great and working for it. Anything less will get you less.
DISCILPLINE
For some, procrastination is natural. Getting it done tomorrow is normal, except tomorrow never comes and what may have started in a great burst of energy stays half done, or with some, never gets started.
Discipline is setting up a time and place, and sticking to it. A schedule, if need be. Some writer’s cannot work that way. I’m one of them. I write when I write. Period. No schedule. That doesn’t mean I don’t get anything done, because I do. I write when I feel like it, which is pretty much all the time. However, that doesn’t necessarily mean I’m always writing on my current novel, because I write lots of other stuff at the same time. I get to the novel when I have a mind, and I make significant progress. I have no problem with either motivation or discipline.
For some of you, you NEED discipline because you’re not inclined to stick with things as well as I do.
Set a schedule and stick to it. This means sit down at a certain time and do something. I don’t necessarily mean write so-and-so many pages a day. That’s too restrictive and rigid. While that might work for some people, what I recommend is that you sit down and do something creative with your story. It might be a few pages, it might be a chapter. It might be research. It might be re-reading a portion, or checking continuity somewhere.
Discipline means working on the project on a regular basis.
Little-by-little, the work will get dun didded!
SUMMARY
Nobody can make your luck for you except you. The first step it to actually complete something. The second step is to never give up. Motivation and discipline.
Happy writing!
ASKING OTHERS FOR IDEAS VERSUS RESEARCH
Asking others for ideas is one thing. Asking questions, such as technical things is quite another.
I’ve talked about both and seen both quite often on the forums.
There’s a difference.
A BIG difference.
WRITING THE BOOK FOR YOU
When one asks others for ideas, especially in an open forum, this is not only laziness, at least in my book, but it’s also leaving the writer open to liability.
Think about it.
Author asks forum for an idea for his or her story. For instance, what should they name their hero?
Through the hundreds of suggestions, someone comes up with a name.
Author uses that name.
The book takes off and the series makes money.
Now, the original person that suggested the name sues author for a piece of the pie.
“Hey, it was my idea in the first place. Author grabbed it from me and never gave me credit, profited from it and bla bla bla.”
Haven’t we all seen this before?
What if the author asks the forum for a particular plot twist?
Someone gives him or her one.
Call the lawyers!
These are very simplified examples, but by being lazy, or not having your own creative spark, you’re opening yourself up to this vulnerability every time you ask someone else to come up with creative ideas, whether on an open forum, or even asking other people individually.
Besides, THE IDEAS AREN’T YOUR OWN.
Geez, don’t any of you EVER watch the news?
What about owning your own ideas?
ASKING QUESTIONS FOR RESEARCH
Asking a technical question for research is a whole different side of the coin.
Technical questions in no way write the book for you. They don’t cause creativity issues because they’re just issues that may get readers to call you on something.
Just the other day, I saw an excellent question. A poster asked if a cell phone would work if the user was buried six (or so) feet underground (I assume in some kind of container where the person could push the buttons or even see them).
The answers varied, and I’m not sure if his or her question ever got answered. This, folks, is the type of question that’s excellent research. In no way does it encroach on your creativity. It only enforces your sense of reality in the prose!
In my own example, back before I even had forums to consult, was a question for one of my upcoming novels about what voltages did the Russians use on their nuclear weapons systems?
As you can imagine, trying to research something like that on the net would raise all kinds of red flags. It would probably get me a visit from the CIA or some other guv’mint acronym agency!
Luckily, where I worked were some military hardware enthusiasts. I was able to find the answer. Not only that, they told me where to look on my own. The place was so obvious, I was flabbergasted, to say the least.
SUMMARY
Nobody should creatively write your book for you. That should be YOU and nobody else, unless you’re writing collaboratively. Don’t let laziness interfere and leave yourself open to liability.
Besides, why write a story when you don’t completely own it?
On the other hand, don’t be afraid to ask technical questions. There’s a HUGE difference. By asking, you avoid the pitfalls of getting stuff wrong and having your readers call you on it.
Happy writing!
HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE YOU TO WRITE A BOOK?
I see this question fairly often on the forums. It’s especially relevant to new writers.
How long does it take one to write a book?
How long does it take you?
My answer is not all that different from a lot of other people.
“As long as it takes.”
SELF-IMPOSED DEADLINES
Everyone at least has a passing thought about self-imposed if not actual deadlines. Well, everyone except me. Never in my life have I had any kind of deadline. Period. I haven’t imposed it on myself, or even thought about it because of my personal process.
It’s not that I don’t procrastinate once in a while. It’s that I just don’t work that way when it comes to writing. I write when I feel like it, and when I feel like it, it flows.
For some of you, especially if writing is a hobby, a job, or a torture, you need deadlines to keep you motivated. If not for a deadline, whether self-imposed or given to you by outside forces, you might never get anything done.
What might’ve started as a brilliant idea may wallow in the muck and end up forgotten or half evolved, never to see the light of day.
Some people just have inherent laziness and always need the extra push. Their end result may be brilliant, but one has to question why they’re doing it in the first place. Part of that questioning is that I have such a different outlook on the whole thing.
I love the whole creating process, so I do it for pleasure and creativity. Therefore, I don’t need any deadlines. I look forward to it. It’s an escape, an outlet, an artistic way to delve into another world.
Some people watch TV. While I do have a few favorite TV shows, there’s another one playing in my mind that I translate to paper.
No self-imposed deadlines for me!
If it works for you, use it.
EXTERNALLY IMPOSED DEADLINES
If you work for someone, it’s only natural that you’re given deadlines. When creativity’s involved, that can put a real damper on the way things come out. For some, having that imposed deadline from an external source works just the opposite. It fires up the writer and gets them going. As a former technical writer, I worked to a deadline. In that case, it was a pure pleasure for me, and the deadlines were never a factor.
ACTUAL NUMBERS
For the curious, what are some actual numbers?
When I first started out, and up to a few years ago, I could whip out a first draft of a novel in six months. However, given a job change and a lot less spare time, it now takes about two years. A big difference. Outside of that, nothing, creativity-wise, has changed.
Some people, as in that writing contest they have every year, can whip out a novel in a month. While I probably could if I set my mind to it, why would I? There’s no point. I don’t work that way. It’s fun for some people, but not for me. NOBODY is going to dictate how I get my process done. Period.
If I decide to write something quick, it’ll be because I want to do it.
How about you?
Looking at the answers to a recent poll, I saw everything from whatever it takes to years.
As expected, the answers are not exactly what a newbie either wanted or expected to hear. However, there’s a lot more reality to this passion that a newbie is either going to be surprised, disappointed, or elated to find out as they learn the ropes.
What about you?
Happy writing!
FREE WRITING FOR YOUR FANS
How many of you authors offer up free samples for your fans? The question came up on one of the many forums I am on and I had to think about that one.
I often wonder what one would give from a current work to entice the reader to buy the entire novel.
That’s assuming one is marketing an entire novel.
How do you look at it?
These are my thoughts.
AMAZON
If you already have a book out, guess what? All one has to do is go to the “look inside” feature, and there you go. A free sample of the first few chapters for everyone to see. The reader can see right away your writing style and how you start the book out. If it grabs you, which is kind of the point of “look inside,” they’ll be more likely to buy it. This is kind of what agents and publishers do when they review manuscripts before taking on clients.
If you don’t grab them, or the writing sucks, it goes right in the trash can.
The same for readers.
So…
RANDOM CHAPTERS
When you select random chapters as gifts to the reader, to entice them to buy your book, you’re not really giving them a true representation of the book. You’re cherry picking parts. You may be giving away big secret plot points, or trying not to. At the same time you’re trying to entice them to buy your book but maybe, just maybe, you don’t know how to start it. They may like that ONE chapter, but when they buy the book, may get bored and put it down.
I, on the other hand, let my writing do the talking with the “look inside” doing it for me. While I don’t mind samples per se, I have a different way of approaching it.
UNRELATED SHORT STORIES
In my fantasy series, Meleena’s Adventures, I have a page on this web site called just that. There, I post a short story under the banner What’s Meleena Up To? These are mini-adventures, loosely in chronological order that are not related to any of the books I have out. They’re mini-tales I write when I feel like it. No schedule, no pressure, just random inspirations that hit me. They may be some little thing I may have forgot to throw in to one of the books, or something entirely unrelated that I came up with. They’re independent and usually have characters from the books, but the setting, at least so far, have all been in her hometown of Bug Flat.
As for my Gold series, I have what’s called The Limnophobic Chronicles. The title is based on the protagonist Detach’s fear of fresh water lakes. There are no stories, per se, but facts and insights into the research on my Gold series of adventure/thriller novels.
LEGALITIES
Some people worry about posting chapters from their books. Do they have to get permission from their publisher? If they’re not self-published, yes they do!
Can someone steal your ideas?
Here we go again. Anyone can steal anything but once you write it down, it’s yours. Someone else may use the same plot, but they can only tell it in their own words. The Lord Of The Rings has been done over a million times, but it’s never the same. The idea isn’t unique, so each time it’s a distinct story.
Get over it.
SUMMARY
To me, sample chapters should be left to Amazon, because that’s where people are going to be able to determine if they’re going to keep reading or put the book down. A cherry picked chapter later in the book tells the reader nothing. Oh, and if that chapter gives away the plot…
Happy writing!
